Comic Practice

Last summer, I decided to do a little comic practice.  I wasn’t entirely fond of the way I drew backgrounds, so I decided the main focus for these practice pages would be: the background, perspective, and overall flow of each page.

Sooo, how’d I do?  Anything that could be improved?  I’d appreciate any feedback to better myself as an artist.  The better I get, the higher quality my comic pages will become.   I’ll probably make more practice pages on some of my actual comic series (SatBK: Chaotix, and my TRACER series).  It’s about time I completed more of those anyway.

The story of these pages is continuing off from an idea I got after drawing a concept in this previous deviation> xaolin26.deviantart.com/art/So…

For the sake of understanding the concept of these comic pages, I’ll paste the basic premise of the idea here from the previous deviation:

The story starts off with Espio returning to his clan from a recent mission. He contemplates recent events, such as leaving the Chaotix and the Iron Queen conquering the Bride of Four Houses (events in this comic take place before Sonic Universe #13, so Espio is still with his clan after turning on the Chaotix). He returns to his clan only to find they’ve all disappeared. Upon discovering the wreckage, Espio is attacked by unfamiliar ninjas in black clothing. Espio manages to fend them off for a few minutes, then one ninja tackles him and both fall down the endless abyss. The rest of the ninjas leave them for dead and escape through a warp ring.

comic practice continued>  xaolin26.deviantart.com/art/Co…

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DAY 23

31 days of uploading> xaolin26.deviantart.com/art/31…

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Espio the Chameleon @ SEGA
Ninja badguys from Usagi Yojimbo @ Stan Sakai
artwork and story concept @ me!